Erk, thanks for pointing those areas out. e.e; Yeah, I'm gonna completely overhaul this fic before I repost it anywhere. I have a hard time writing a9, but I keep trying anyway. >_>; I've also recently seen some very suggestive almost-fanservice moments between Tora and the others, so I'm really going to have to work on a reason for him to be closeted in this fic, given that lately he seems more than comfy being touchy-feely with the others. XD D'oh.