Someone wrote in [community profile] last_pleasure 2007-01-15 08:11 pm (UTC)

Uh, yeah, you did. ^^;;; If you just skim it, you'll miss a lot. But apparently you're not the only one, so I'll revise this quite a bit in the next draft. Aheh, I hate deadlines. It wasn't supposed to be clear what was going on -- I tried to show that Saga was thinking one thing, Tora another, and the others either staying out of it, or also getting the wrong impression. Ah well, back to revising. ^^; Thanks for reviewing.

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