I think the thing is (to respond to what you said to the person after me), without having to put it into numbers and then elaborate on why, I dunno about the others but I'm kinda brainsplodeyed right now as far as concrit on something this good XD; there's nothing that sticks out that way, there's only small shades of grey. So, if you like, I'll come back here within the next couple days and step through the routine I'm in, do my best and then just delete the numbers before I post it, cool? ^_~ And maybe other people will do the same, if they're in a similar head-routine... This fic is good enough that without being forced to quantify and explain, it's hard to make oneself do it (it takes a lot more thought and brain-subtlety than I may be capable of o_o). Now there's an odd compliment, eh... XD;